Editorial Assessment + Rewrite Plan in 7 Business Days.
Stop rewriting by intuition.
Start rewriting with a forensic plan.
Built by Thomas Sibelius
Founder of KANONYQ,
an independent narrative diagnostics practice based in Europe, and creator of the Narrative Forensics framework.
The same methodology behind the public case studies is used in every private audit.
Your draft is not failing at random.
KANONYQ shows you where the draft breaks — and what to fix first.
Not a beta read. Not a line edit.
A structural audit of story logic, pacing, and reader trust.
The audit traces cause and effect, tests the pressure points in your story, and pinpoints the breaks that damage reader trust.
A precise diagnosis for rewrite paralysis.
A complete map of what’s broken, why, and where.
We identify scene dependencies, pacing fatigue, and failed payoffs — so each revision strengthens the whole draft.
The Forensic Report (70–120 Pages)
The Action Dossier (8–15 Pages)
A three-pass rewrite plan you can start immediately.
Every fix includes trade-offs, risks, and a verification checklist.
Written-only process: you upload the manuscript, the audit is directed by Thomas Sibelius, and you receive a clear revision plan.
You’ll know what to fix first in 15 minutes.
Here's what the first page looks like — a real fix from our Frankenstein case study:
How Thomas Sibelius diagnoses narrative failure on the page
A real page from the Frankenstein case study.
The problem: Victor ignores an obvious threat and his wife dies. The reader thinks "he's an idiot."
The fix: seed doubt, bridge the deduction, pay it off as seconds-late tragedy.
The result: inevitable horror, not plot stupidity.
Before your next rewrite, check for the five fastest trust-killers.
Download “5 Plot Holes That Kill Reader Trust.”
Spot the five fastest trust-killers — and fix them before your next rewrite pass.
No spam. Just the guide + 1–2 practical follow-ups.
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